PIM- Iteration 2- Dhanak kay rungg (Colours of the Rainbow)

Last week, while presenting the Iteration 1 for PIM project, I received some interesting feedback  that led me to take a more deeper perspective towards my project. My Professor, Seth Keen suggested to link my initial concept of colors & spontaneity with certain cultural elements that will make it a more personalized project.

Initially it didn’t really click me in terms of executing the recommended shift, because I was working along the lines that were fairly abstractism. But then last night, I had a spontaneous moment of  writing an unplanned piece of poem, It turned out to be exactly what I wanted to say in Narrative, but is in form of a prose / poem.

I believe that the feedback helped me a lot to launch a new strategy for the project that is more promising than what I previously had in mind.

I am still in the process of including a number of relevant sketches, but for now to determine the feel….

here it goes:

This fairly raw at the moment, It has a lot more additions lined up for the final product!